Basic fundamentals/essentials: Fundamentals and
essentials are by their nature elementary, so remove basic from each phrase.
(Filled to) capacity: Something filled is done
so to capacity, so describing something as “filled to capacity” is repetitive.
Came at a time when: When provides the necessary temporal
reference to the action of coming; “at a time” is redundant.
Close proximity/scrutiny: Proximity means “close in location,” and scrutiny means “close study,” so avoid
qualifying these terms with close.
Collaborate/join/meet/merge
together: If you write of a group that collaborates or meets together, you
imply that there’s another way to collect or confer. To speak of joining or
merging together is, likewise, redundant.
Completely
filled/finished/opposite: Something that is filled or finished is
thoroughly so; completelyis redundant. Something that is opposite
isn’t necessarily diametrically opposed, especially in qualitative
connotations, but the modifier is still extraneous.
Consensus of opinion: A consensus is an
agreement but not necessarily one about an opinion, so “consensus of opinion”
is not purely redundant, but the phrase “of opinion” is usually unnecessary.
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